Monday, September 22, 2008

New Piece

This is kind of a prologue thing for something I'm wring. I promise the real thing is better than the prologue. You know the drill: honest feedback please!!!!



That summer really wasn't supposed to be special. Just the same. But it turned into the days we would never forget. The people we changed. The places we went. The wounds we healed. It all came together. I don't even think we all realized it until a while later. Even now, at 20 years old, I write this remembering what I did right, and very wrong.

2 comments:

Kenz said...

Grabbing, to be sure. It does indeed make me want to read the rest. Perhaps borderline a little too...cheesy? I don't know if that's the right word. But good overall.

And way to update!

Kelsey said...

Oooh, grabababer. What went so very wrong? And this time, don't leave us for a month to let us ponder.